Sample Analysis Guide
How to systematically analyze writing samples to extract voice DNA patterns.
Sample Analysis Guide
How to systematically analyze writing samples to extract voice DNA patterns.
The Analysis Philosophy
Sample analysis is the foundation, but not the whole building:
- Samples reveal patterns — They show what the writer does, not always why.
- Interview confirms patterns — Samples might be atypical; interview validates.
- Patterns need examples — Always capture quotes that demonstrate patterns.
- Gaps must be noted — What can't we learn from this sample?
Never finalize a pattern based on samples alone without interview confirmation.
Before You Begin
Gather Context
Before analyzing, know:
- What register is this? (blog, fiction, technical, essay, email)
- Is this typical? (or was it written for an unusual context)
- Was it edited? (by the writer alone, or by others)
- How old is it? (recent, or potentially outdated)
- How long is it? (longer samples = more reliable patterns)
Ideal Sample Characteristics
More reliable:
- Recent (last 1-2 years)
- Self-edited (not heavily touched by others)
- Typical of what they normally write
- At least 1000+ words
- Multiple samples (2-3 minimum)
Less reliable:
- Old (style may have evolved)
- Heavily edited by others
- Written for unusual circumstances
- Very short (under 500 words)
- Single sample only
The Three-Pass Approach
First Pass: Gut Check (2-3 minutes)
Read the sample quickly. Note immediate impressions.
Ask yourself:
- What 3 things jump out about this writing?
- What's the overall temperature? (warm, cool, neutral)
- What register/mode is this?
- Does anything feel distinctive or unusual?
Capture gut impressions before they fade. First reactions often identify the most distinctive patterns.
Example gut notes:
"Short sentences. Very direct. Almost aggressive. Lots of 'But' at sentence starts. No hedging at all."
Second Pass: Quantitative Scan (5-10 minutes)
Measure objective patterns.
Sentence Metrics
| Metric | How to Measure |
|---|---|
| Average sentence length | Word count / sentence count |
| Length range | Shortest to longest sentence |
| Length distribution | How often short (<10), medium (10-20), long (20+) |
Punctuation Count
| Mark | Count per 1000 words |
|---|---|
| Em-dashes | |
| Semicolons | |
| Colons | |
| Parentheses (pairs) | |
| Exclamation points | |
| Question marks |
Word Patterns
| Pattern | Count/Observe |
|---|---|
| "I" sentences | How many start with "I"? |
| "And"/"But" openers | How many sentences start with these? |
| Contractions | Present? Frequent? |
| Paragraph lengths | Short (1-2 sentences), medium (3-5), long (6+) |
Quick Vocabulary Check
- Any recurring words?
- Latinate or Anglo-Saxon preference?
- Technical terms present?
- Jargon or colloquialisms?
Third Pass: Qualitative Analysis (10-15 minutes)
This is where you find the distinctive patterns.
Sentence Architecture
- Internal structure: Simple, compound, or complex sentences?
- Clause patterns: Where do they nest clauses?
- Emphasis placement: Front-loaded or end-weighted?
- Fragments: Present? Intentional?
Look for:
- Unusual constructions
- Signature rhythms
- Consistent patterns across the sample
Paragraph Patterns
- Construction: How do they build paragraphs?
- Topic sentences: First, last, implied?
- Length variation: All similar, or strategic variety?
- Endings: How do paragraphs conclude?
Transitions
- Explicit markers: "However," "Furthermore," etc.
- Implicit flow: Ideas connect without markers
- Bridge words: Repeated concepts that link ideas
- White space: Strategic breaks
Opening & Closing
- How does the piece begin? (hook, scene, question, statement)
- How does it end? (callback, question, definitive, trailing)
- Are these moves typical? (compare across samples if possible)
Tone Markers
- Warmth indicators: Personal anecdotes, "I/you" language, emotional words
- Coolness indicators: Impersonal constructions, analytical distance
- Confidence level: Hedging vs. assertion
- Authority stance: Expert, guide, fellow traveler
Signature Elements
- What's unusual? Things you don't see in most writing
- What's consistent? Patterns that repeat
- What's recognizable? Things that would identify this writer
Comparative Analysis
When you have multiple samples:
Consistency Check
| Pattern | Sample 1 | Sample 2 | Sample 3 | Consistent? |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Sentence length | ||||
| Punctuation style | ||||
| Paragraph length | ||||
| Tone | ||||
| First person presence |
Consistent patterns = High confidence, can include in profile without caveat
Inconsistent patterns = Need investigation:
- Different registers?
- Evolution over time?
- Context-dependent variation?
- One sample is atypical?
Variation Analysis
When patterns differ across samples:
- Identify the variation: What's different?
- Seek explanation: Is there a reason?
- Determine whether to:
- Capture dominant pattern (most frequent)
- Capture context-dependent pattern (when X, do Y)
- Treat as different registers (separate DNA docs)
- Investigate further in interview
What to Look For (Quick Reference)
Highly Distinctive Patterns
These are often the most identifying:
- Unusual punctuation habits
- Sentence opening patterns
- Paragraph ending moves
- Distinctive transitions
- Pet phrases or constructions
- Unusual word choices
- Signature rhythms
Common But Important Patterns
These establish the baseline:
- Sentence length tendencies
- Formality level
- First person presence
- Contraction usage
- Paragraph length
- Tone/temperature
Often Overlooked Patterns
Don't forget to check:
- What's absent (things they never do)
- Opening moves across multiple pieces
- How they handle uncertainty
- Question usage patterns
- Humor placement and style
Gap Identification
After analysis, note what you CAN'T determine from samples:
Common Gaps
- Intent: Why do they make certain choices?
- Aspirational vs. actual: Is this how they want to write or how they do?
- Context-dependence: Does this change in other situations?
- Evolution: Is this current or outdated?
- Editing impact: How much was changed by others?
- Anti-patterns: What do they avoid? (Absence is hard to prove)
- Humor: If not present in samples, does that mean none exists?
Interview to Fill Gaps
For each gap, identify the interview question that would fill it:
| Gap | Question to Ask |
|---|---|
| Why short sentences? | "Do you consciously write short sentences? Why?" |
| Is this formality typical? | "Is this your usual level of formality?" |
| Why no contractions? | "Do you avoid contractions intentionally?" |
| Edited by others? | "Was this piece edited by someone else?" |
Red Flags
Signs the sample may not be representative:
Content Red Flags
- Heavy jargon in supposedly casual writing
- Sudden formality shifts mid-piece
- Inconsistent voice within the same piece
- Generic AI-like patterns (might not be their writing)
Context Red Flags
- Sample is very old (5+ years)
- Sample was for unusual context (school, job application)
- Sample was heavily edited by others
- Sample is much shorter than typical work
- Only one sample available
Pattern Red Flags
- Patterns that contradict user's self-description
- Patterns wildly different from other samples
- Patterns that match AI writing tells
When red flags appear: Note them. Ask clarifying questions in interview. Don't assume sample represents true voice.
Sample Analysis Worksheet
Use this for systematic analysis:
SAMPLE INFO
- Title/description:
- Date written:
- Word count:
- Register/mode:
- Edited by others?:
FIRST PASS (gut impressions)
- 3 things that jump out:
1.
2.
3.
- Overall temperature:
- Initial distinctiveness notes:
SECOND PASS (metrics)
- Avg sentence length:
- Sentence range:
- Punctuation notable:
- Paragraph lengths:
- "I" frequency:
- Contraction use:
THIRD PASS (qualitative)
- Sentence architecture:
- Paragraph patterns:
- Transitions:
- Opening move:
- Closing move:
- Tone markers:
- Signature elements:
PATTERNS IDENTIFIED
- Strong patterns (confident):
1.
2.
3.
- Tentative patterns (need confirmation):
1.
2.
- Potential anti-patterns:
1.
GAPS TO FILL
- What can't I determine?
- Questions for interview:
RED FLAGS
- Any concerns about this sample?
From Analysis to DNA Document
Translating Findings
| Analysis Finding | DNA Document Entry |
|---|---|
| "Avg sentence length 12 words, range 4-28" | "Short sentences (avg 12 words) with occasional longer ones for rhythm" |
| "Em-dash count: 8 per 1000 words" | "Heavy em-dash user—deployed for parenthetical insertions and dramatic pivots" |
| "All paragraphs 2-4 sentences" | "Short paragraphs (2-4 sentences); uses single-sentence paragraphs for emphasis" |
| "No semicolons found" | "Never uses semicolons" (confirm in interview) |
| "'Actually' appears 6 times" | "Pet word: 'actually'—appears frequently for emphasis" |
Confidence Levels
Rate each pattern:
- High confidence: Consistent across samples, confirmed in interview
- Medium confidence: Consistent in samples, not yet confirmed
- Low confidence: Based on single sample or inconsistent across samples
Common Analysis Mistakes
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Overgeneralizing from one sample — Wait for confirmation before finalizing patterns.
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Missing the forest for trees — Don't get lost in metrics. What makes this writer recognizable?
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Ignoring gut reactions — First impressions often catch the most distinctive patterns.
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Treating absence as avoidance — Just because something's not in the sample doesn't mean they never do it.
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Assuming samples are representative — They might be unusual. Always check.
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Skipping gap identification — Know what you don't know.